Thursday, July 9, 2009

Let It Be…..

I Think….
I Cry….
I Feel…..
But... then I don’t show…..
Why should I….
When I know….
People don’t care....
I don’t care too…
Let It Be….
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24 comments:

  1. UnknownJuly 9, 2009 at 11:58 PM

    good start to poetry :)
    Keep going

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  2. CreativityJuly 10, 2009 at 1:28 AM

    Beautiful very well expressed Dear :) Take Care :)

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  3. Suyog ShopurkarJuly 10, 2009 at 1:46 AM

    expressive and impressive !!!

    keep writing and rocking :)

    http://ordinaire-ecriture.blogspot.com

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  4. PULKITJuly 10, 2009 at 2:17 AM

    This was very small in terms of length but I loved the clarity if expression!
    keep writing!

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  5. SJuly 10, 2009 at 2:33 AM

    Is this your creatin ... coz I seem to have read this somewhere, or may be it was there in my mind too ... May be i'll try adding up some mess, which is there in my senses too... here it goes . . .

    Let It Be…

    Why did you leave,
    Could have asked me.
    Ohh lord, I'm broke,
    An end is all I see.

    Still Let it be. !

    Wow .. u made me a poet .. thanks Deepika ;)

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  6. RajJuly 10, 2009 at 3:28 AM

    harsh and true.

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  7. NRJuly 10, 2009 at 3:30 AM

    We all are alone...so got to fight our problems alone!!!!

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  8. LuciferJuly 10, 2009 at 4:20 AM

    ppl do care...v jus look at d wrong ppl

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  9. Amal BoseJuly 10, 2009 at 4:37 AM

    some people do care..
    n u shd care too..

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  10. Deepika July 10, 2009 at 4:41 AM

    Hey Amal and Mayank
    It was excuding family and few close ones... it was about people around you.. who walk with you.... sit with you... eat with you.... but still NOT with you...

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  11. NitinJuly 10, 2009 at 5:35 AM

    acha!!! is it really so?!?
    wel its written well. But i guess needed a lil mor attention..

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  12. HemCheJuly 10, 2009 at 6:32 AM

    hi! nice short poetry with hidden massive meaning! keep rocking with such poems !

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  13. ArvJuly 10, 2009 at 7:33 AM

    There are always 2 sides to every thing...

    so there are people out here who do care abt ya...

    Hope the smiles and good times find you soon... take care da...

    Wishing you the best... cheers...

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  14. NehaJuly 10, 2009 at 9:13 AM

    We have to gather strength when we know we moving against the wind and none of us is favoring us, no matter its for our benefit and theirs...... Moving on a path like this would never be easy Deepika...... All we need is our patience and faith within us intact that we have to meet the targets we had originally set.... This is gonna be a life time experience..... trust me.... We would learn only out of it all

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  15. Shaunak MukherjeeJuly 10, 2009 at 9:22 PM

    Most really don't. But it's surprising when someone who even being a stranger, truly does care.
    Sad part is because of the hundred people who don't care, we fail to notice the one that does.

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  16. HaRy!!July 11, 2009 at 1:19 AM

    hmm there are some ppl who care ! Its always upto us to decide who are the one's.but truly very well carved write!

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  17. Manish RajJuly 11, 2009 at 11:11 AM

    You should think...
    You should cry..
    You should feel...
    And show that too...
    Becoz you'll never know all..
    those who care for you..
    and just want you to
    Be yourself.

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  18. VijayJuly 12, 2009 at 5:42 AM

    Sentences with loose ends keep you guessing. Nicely written, Deepika

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  19. etJuly 12, 2009 at 1:20 PM

    Words of wisdom :)
    Reminds me of one of my close friends.. and then again,Let it be by The Beatles. have you checked it?

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  20. MeJuly 13, 2009 at 3:58 AM

    Good one here... and makes a lot of sense in lesser words... I hardly find such poems usually... and this one says it all for all of us in a way...

    :) But hey! I do care.

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  21. Deepika July 16, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    Thank you friends for your appreciation and encouragement... M glad that you liked it.. :)

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  22. aravindJuly 18, 2009 at 11:44 PM

    hhhhmmmm.......dats laconic

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  23. MeenakshiJuly 20, 2009 at 3:00 AM

    good one..

    must add, I liked your blog template.

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  24. muthuAugust 1, 2009 at 5:16 AM

    hmhm--

    yeah, you may be right--

    but then we will never know whom to care for, until we do care for them... right??

    Caring is almost like putting your trust in some1, you have to take your chances.....


    anyways-- simple & straight forward lines...

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