Is this your creatin ... coz I seem to have read this somewhere, or may be it was there in my mind too ... May be i'll try adding up some mess, which is there in my senses too... here it goes . . .
Let It Be…
Why did you leave, Could have asked me. Ohh lord, I'm broke, An end is all I see.
Hey Amal and Mayank It was excuding family and few close ones... it was about people around you.. who walk with you.... sit with you... eat with you.... but still NOT with you...
We have to gather strength when we know we moving against the wind and none of us is favoring us, no matter its for our benefit and theirs...... Moving on a path like this would never be easy Deepika...... All we need is our patience and faith within us intact that we have to meet the targets we had originally set.... This is gonna be a life time experience..... trust me.... We would learn only out of it all
Most really don't. But it's surprising when someone who even being a stranger, truly does care. Sad part is because of the hundred people who don't care, we fail to notice the one that does.
You should think... You should cry.. You should feel... And show that too... Becoz you'll never know all.. those who care for you.. and just want you to Be yourself.
I Think….
24 comments:
good start to poetry :)
Keep going
Beautiful very well expressed Dear :) Take Care :)
expressive and impressive !!!
keep writing and rocking :)
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This was very small in terms of length but I loved the clarity if expression!
keep writing!
Is this your creatin ... coz I seem to have read this somewhere, or may be it was there in my mind too ... May be i'll try adding up some mess, which is there in my senses too... here it goes . . .
Let It Be…
Why did you leave,
Could have asked me.
Ohh lord, I'm broke,
An end is all I see.
Still Let it be. !
Wow .. u made me a poet .. thanks Deepika ;)
harsh and true.
We all are alone...so got to fight our problems alone!!!!
ppl do care...v jus look at d wrong ppl
some people do care..
n u shd care too..
Hey Amal and Mayank
It was excuding family and few close ones... it was about people around you.. who walk with you.... sit with you... eat with you.... but still NOT with you...
acha!!! is it really so?!?
wel its written well. But i guess needed a lil mor attention..
hi! nice short poetry with hidden massive meaning! keep rocking with such poems !
There are always 2 sides to every thing...
so there are people out here who do care abt ya...
Hope the smiles and good times find you soon... take care da...
Wishing you the best... cheers...
We have to gather strength when we know we moving against the wind and none of us is favoring us, no matter its for our benefit and theirs...... Moving on a path like this would never be easy Deepika...... All we need is our patience and faith within us intact that we have to meet the targets we had originally set.... This is gonna be a life time experience..... trust me.... We would learn only out of it all
Most really don't. But it's surprising when someone who even being a stranger, truly does care.
Sad part is because of the hundred people who don't care, we fail to notice the one that does.
hmm there are some ppl who care ! Its always upto us to decide who are the one's.but truly very well carved write!
You should think...
You should cry..
You should feel...
And show that too...
Becoz you'll never know all..
those who care for you..
and just want you to
Be yourself.
Sentences with loose ends keep you guessing. Nicely written, Deepika
Words of wisdom :)
Reminds me of one of my close friends.. and then again,Let it be by The Beatles. have you checked it?
Good one here... and makes a lot of sense in lesser words... I hardly find such poems usually... and this one says it all for all of us in a way...
:) But hey! I do care.
Thank you friends for your appreciation and encouragement... M glad that you liked it.. :)
hhhhmmmm.......dats laconic
good one..
must add, I liked your blog template.
hmhm--
yeah, you may be right--
but then we will never know whom to care for, until we do care for them... right??
Caring is almost like putting your trust in some1, you have to take your chances.....
anyways-- simple & straight forward lines...
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